Version One:
Version Two:
UPDATE ON 24th JAN
Market research proved helpful in this editing decision; feedback from Facebook proved that our target audience preferred Version One, in addition to the narrative being clearer when the movie was introduced without the 'psyhcotic' jumpy text at the beginning. As a group, we have decided to follow the information from our audience and include Version One in our final piece.
I like the ideas behind these - to improve I would suggest a larger font - it seems very small and very regular at present. The change to red and the disjointed title works well. Needs to be bigger. and then there is the music as well which also contribute to mod.
ReplyDeletecan you evidence the Facebook comments? An examiner might question the authenticity of this otherwise?
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